Lovey Dovey

Yeah, I can tell

By those sparkling eyes

Shining with love

Like fireflies

With her head in the clouds 

And the way she dreams

Love that exceeds all else

That's what it seems

She whistles with hope

Like a morning dove

I just can't believe

She's fallen in love

Author's Note

I know this is short, but I actually kind of like it and hope you do, too! :)

Reviews

[White Ink]

Another lovely poem! added to my fav.

[akapr17other]

Definately a carefree and casual poem. I like this style. Love can change you in good ways and sometimes in bad ways if you're with the wrong person. You've showed us in this poem the good ways that love shapes us. I feel like the message is very strong and it's something I write all my poetry about. The message that everyone around us shapes who we are as individuals. Well done as always.

[Krystal Nicole]

I love the way the words flow together. Such a sweet poem!!! Im not much of a poet, but great job!!!

[~Lizzy♬]

This poem isn't short. The length doesn't matter when it comes to poetry because all you're doing is expressing your ideas and thoughts into a beautiful piece of writing, like this one. Wonderful job! :)

~Lizzard~

[Tate Morgan]

First love is the most torrid and in some wayspainful

[Erinne S.]

Even though it's short it packs in a lot of meaning and emotion. Loved it! I believe the last line you meant to put "It's" you just have it. My only critique. Another great poem!!

~Erinne