Make Me Smile

You give me a smile

It's been a bad night

You're the only one

Who makes it all right

If I didn't have you

I'd be lost for sure

Who could I turn to

Anymore?

You make my days brighter

By always being there

Oh, how I love

That you truly care

You give me a smile

It's been a bad night

You're the only one

Who makes it all right

Author's Note

I thought about going through rough days, I could imagine your husband, boyfriend or whatever could always make it all right with a smile. Hope ya like it!

Reviews

[Anjali]

Loved it so much!! It's so sweet and cute.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I love the repeition of the first stanza. I thought it was a great work of literature. thank you for posting this and sending me a read request!

[akapr17other]

It's a little redundant but I guess that's one way to convey a message in poetry. Other than that, well done once again.

[Julie Beth]

im smiling :) great job i loved it

[Jazique]

You used repitions, it rhymed a little so I must say well done and for some reason all your poems having me smile. So nice job on doing "Make me smile" simple true and thanks for doing it for us too.

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

This made me smile. Great job, Kelly!

[Murtuza]

I'm smiling all over. This is a really nice read. Thanks for sharing!

[Erinne S.]

This made me smile. :) And that is the idea behind this piece so I believe you did your job well! Great job!

~Erinne

[~Lizzy♬]

Wow! I really love this poem, it made me smile :) Great write!

~Lizzard~

[Krystal Nicole]

I dont know about you, but I like it. Great job!!