My journey thru life

I'm walking on this road I call home..

Looking for a foundation, a piece of land, to reside on..

On my journey thru life, I catch myself finding hope with every open space I find..

But it's never right, the ground, so my hope is repeatedly shot down..

So I keep walking, tirelessly..

And on this journey, i've come to realize that I can't help who I was or who I could be..

I can't help who i've become, it's the society I live in that has made me who I am..

They don't like what they've created & I don't like my creators..

I've had head on collisions on my course that had formed deep craters..

And i've pondered, each time, on if I should cave & jump in..

But my crave for love won't let this end..

So I continue walking down this road I call home..

Still looking for a foundation, a piece of land, to reside on..

All I want is to find a heart that'll accept my love..

I went thru a rough patch with somebody I thought was the one..

But that's done..

And I don't know when it happened but now that i'm back on my search, it's as if the game has completely changed..

Men are being vulnerable..

Women are being men..

We want relationships while y'all want relations..

Everybody has grown distant instead of closer..

Souls that were once entwined are no longer..

Women are being overly aggressive & men are somehow finding it attractive..

That they fight & leave little to our imagination on social media cites..

If this is what this world has become then I don't know if I want to be a part..

But there is this one soul..

Who reminds me of home & I don't know, I could be wrong..

But if finding out is wrong, I don't want to go right..

I've been hurt so i'm not really sure how much I have left..

They say a heart is a house for love & if she'd let me in, i'd give her every bit of what I have..

I've come to a complete stop..

On my walk down this road that I formerly called home..

I think I may have finally found a foundation, a piece of land, to reside on..

On my journey thru life, i've come across many open spaces but never have I come across such an exquisite soul with such a beautiful face as hers..

Like me, she's hurt..

Wounded..

Yet I can't help but wonder, if together, we could save one another & possibly start a forever....

Reviews

[Heartful5160]

It's always great to find someone that can see something from the same perspective as you. It's such a great write. There are things that we don't like in the world and some people see the world in a different way than others. I'm one out of few, that see the world as hell, but I believe that they we or myself can try to change it in some sort. IF you see the world as bland and boring and you have no one to share great experiences with or great time with, than you usually have something to miss out on. But when you finally meet someone, such as a friend or a partner in life, it seems as though your life lights up. I enjoyed the write. Keep writing!