Our love story

It started before we knew it..

And when we felt like it just began, we were already a few chapters in..

We were drawn to each other..

We felt the connection without having to know one another..

That's why, when we officially met, it didn't take long for us to come together..

It didn't take us long to fall & begin planning for our forever..

She was my angel, from above..

I was her blessing, her one & only love..

But like every story, we reached our downfall & just kept spiraling down..

To the point where I looked around, only to see that she was nowhere to be found..

It broke my heart..

That we fell apart..

For our love was & still is a gift from heaven..

Our story will one day be of legend..

I know it seems as if this is the end of her & me..

But, THIS IS NOT, the end of our love story....

Reviews

[Hope]

and This SHOULD not be the end of your story ! I was taken through a journey when the poem started..I thought you'd write a bit more about the time you two spent together ! The poem is now one of my favourites if you could just elaborate the middle part a bit because your opening leaves the reader CRAVING for more ! Please please ! if you could write the middle part more elaborately because the reader does NOT wan't the poem to end so soon !!! I don't :) A great work..tell me if you write another one of these :) :D

[Hope]

*want.....

[Tha_Truth419]

Thank you.. Sometimes I get too caught up in the middle & I start to lose focus of the overall story or it lacks the "juiciness" it needs but its something im going to work on.. Thank you again

[Hope]

You are most welcome ! :)