Directions

North

South

East

West

Somwhere in between?

Nowhere at all?

Where should I go?

Am I alone?

North

South

East

West

So many sites to see

So many people to meet

Smells and tastes to experience

But who will I share it with?

North

South

East

West

I will not go

I'm all alone

Reviews

[Michael.]

Not my favorite thing I've read but you can't not read it then you read the first few words.
It catches your attention.

[Meaghan]

brilliant, I love this. :)

[paul]

absolutely brilliant

[Brad]

yes, from begining to end this one holds the reader in place with you...see, you're not alone now

[KAREN]

Love how this poem starts, love the middle and the end! Excellent write!

[E.H. Monroe]

This is the thought pattern of a kid, or a coward who is sees pictures of the pyramids and patterns on the ballrooms of mystic orient temples and can't even get off his/her f*****g block because they are terrified to be alone.
This is a brilliant write because it captures that feeling of fear of not being able to see anything because of the lack of self esteem.
nicely done

[Nida Lodi]

great job!

[Jeff]

Good job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem, I loved it!

[steph]

This is awsome, its almost chant like, with the repetitive expression of direction. Excellent job, I do however understand the loneliness. My only friends are here