THE DEADLIEST SECRET

IF YOU WANT TO KNOW ME

THEN FOLLOW ME TO TRUTH

SECRETS ARE COVERED WITH LIES

I'VE BECOME HIDDEN IN THIS WORLD

UNABLE TO DIE

 

THIS WORLD IS FILLED WITH HATE

DEATH AND PAIN

IF YOU CAN'T STAND IT THEN

GET OUT OF IT'S WAY

 

HOW DOES IT FEEL TO FEEL LIKE ME?

CHOICES NEEDING TO BE MADE

DEATH, DECAY, AND DARKNESS LURK

BEHIND THESE SUICIDAL EYES

 

I'M NO LONGER FILLED WITH LIGHT

I CAN NO LONGER FIGHT

I'M SICK OF THIS WORLD

THAT FORCES ME TO HIDE

Reviews

[BloodyRabbit]

Love it! Especially
"I'm no longer filled with light
I can no longer fight
I'm sick of this world
that forces me to hide" cuz I can relate and probably quite a lot of people can relate to this as well.
Really good poem.

[♥Kaitlyn♥]

really good :)

[Apathy To Empathy]

"If you look in the mirror and don't like what you see, then you can find at first hand what it's like to be me..." -My Chemical Romance
This lyric played and dwelled in my head as I read this raw emotional poem. As sad as it is, and alone as one can feel, there's always another. 100% relating on my part. Great write!

[steph]

This is a disturbing poem, the emotion is raw, and painful, and it relates well, to feelings I have had in the past. Its an excellent poem

[paul]

hey. great friggin poem. i can relate, a million percent