Hate

It hurts to leave

It hurts to stay

What can I do?

I want a family

I want a life

What can I do?

I hate myself

I hate you as well

Nothing can be better

I'm headed for Hell

Reviews

[Jeff]

Incredibly powerful statements here.

[Brad]

trust me, anywhere but there IS hell...it'll come, patience...it'll come at you from behind and hit you in the face with a cinder block

[Liza]

this sounds like addiction...wanting it but hating it and then hating oneself because of it....the highs and the lows never lead to a steady ground or balance...sometimes a break is needed to think (relationships can become destructive addictions)

[Lilly Negoi]

hate is not the first step towards hell, not by far :). cowardice is, on the other hand - the fear of facing your own inner throes - and you are no coward as i see in this poem :). the feeling is very well rendered, the strength of it, the confusion. you don't hate anyone, especially yourself - you just don't see a way out of your current situation. time, however, is a brilliant healer, believe me or not. and i'm sure there will be a continuation to this "hate" at the other pole of human passion - love :).

[Brian W. Hastings]

Very powerful statements.

[*Evelen*]

Aww this is so sad but well written. I hope everything turns out okay.