Hate

It hurts to leave

It hurts to stay

What can I do?

I want a family

I want a life

What can I do?

I hate myself

I hate you as well

Nothing can be better

I'm headed for Hell

Reviews

[Cassie]

Wow!!

[Angela]

Wow, I can relate! dark and gloomy, but that's just how life is sometimes.

[Kaitlyn]

:O

[Shadowlily]

This is so direct and literal that you can't help but love it... I really hope it all worked out...

[Emotive Resonance]

aww a very nice poem, we clearly feel the pain.

[KAREN]

Feel the pain and hate! Good Job!

[jazmin]

you know we all feel like that sometimes:) i loved it keep writing.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was one prowerful poem! Well Written!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Love this poem. You didnt say very much, but you said it all.
The emotions here are running wild. Great Work!

[Isha Ethera]

A poem of pain.. know it well. Something missing? Reach for feelings of your ultimate desire..