Emotions

I just want to scream

Anger courses through my veins

It is pointless rage

Caused by nothing and everything

It won't stop

I laugh at my mother

Her useless attempts at scolding

She cannot control me

I am soon a young woman

Yet I am scared

Am I too immature?

Can I handle this?

My fiance reassures me

I am strong and beautiful

I am overwhelmed with happiness

I dance around the room

Then realize my fears

And break down crying

Anger

Fear

Happiness

Fear again...

My emotions constantly change

And I know exactly why

Reviews

[Shadowlily]

Hmmm lol there are a few reasons why emotions jump so crazy.. I understand completely...your fiance is right.. you are strong.. and emotions won't hold you back for too long =) Great write..

[cfix]

Such powerful emotion here.

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emotions seem to rule all of us at some point, and
usually with rhyme or reason-but we all seem to find
the strength to get by such as u and cope...great insight :)
(wonderful poem)

:)

[KAREN]

Every emotion was poored out in this poem causing me the reader to feel each of them as I read! Excellent read!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Powerful work.
Very strong emotional content.

[how.girls.get.clean]

this is great! the emotions fit perfectly into it

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great Poem, emotions was exspressed perfectly!

[ItsMyTimeToShine]

That is amazing. Seriously, its REALLY good. There is so much emotion put into that and it's just ... spectacular. Great job! (:

[Brad]

i think you just climbed into my head

[Tony]

Well, Why??
You youngsters.... always saying something that pleases me.
This poem is a fine articulation of emotion, of that there is no doubt.
Of course, I knew there would be something interesting to read here, when I read the author's avatar.
Well Done, Lost and Alone.