Fly Away

So lost and Confused   
    I'm no longer amused
        So sick and tired
            Of love becoming "expired"
                It's like you're all the same
                    Love and dump without shame
First I'm perfect
    Then I'm worthless
        I'm so used to these words
            Just fly away like a bird
I'm so tired of your lies
    They're like vinegar to flies
        You can't catch me that way
            I'm no longer gonna stay
If you won't leave
    Don't expect it from me
        I'm not your slave
            Don't tell me to behave
All you do is hurt
    You're nothing but a flirt
        Girl after girl fall for you
            They're stuck by your glue
But I am not any longer
    So please don't bother
        I'm tired of leftover love
            It turns me to a wounded dove

Reviews

[paul]

emotionally gripping. very well written.
what a lovely wounded dove

[Tony]

Silly Girls. Always falling for some sheep in wolf's clothing like this dick.
I think drama has replaced true romance in your society.
Good work, L@A.

[I Am Svetlana]

Interesting...hurting love turning you into a dove. Great imagery, by the way. I like your style of poetry, it's quite the hook. Leftover love is a type of love that can deeply hurt us, especially if it's from a person we deeply care about. This has ALSO happened to me, happened with quite a few of my guyfriends and I. But I've learned to eventually move on and brush it off. Yes, it is hard to move on, but sometimes, it's for the best and it makes us stronger in the end.

[Kaitlyn]

I LOVE this poem Aysha!!!
I could look over and tell you that but i am too lazy! :) (just kidding)

[Brian W. Hastings]

Another great write, full of deep emotion that we can all relate too.

[SpokenWord]

I like the stair steps format it made it a roller coaster read from one verse to the next. I think you hit some good word play in this one, I could feel the need to part, the being tired of the B.S. and the message you were sending to him. Great write.

[KAREN]

Sad, and full of emotions! Love the set up! Flows good too.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Yes. I think its time to cut away.

[Brad]

don't look, it'll find YOU

[Lilly Negoi]

i think this would be a very good song. have you thought about this?!