Black and White

Sneezing in this heatwave 

Loving in this grief 

Sometimes actions and thoughts 

feel so out of place 

Because your heart will stop 

even in the middle of the rat race 

Diving into whats right 

holding onto the only light you have 

People will always steal parts of you 

Life is about deciding 

which parts and to which people 

Welcoming the good and understanding the bad 

So, I throw my sweater on 

and head to the beach 

and my rose colored view 

looks pass all the ugly

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Ok, now this I can get behind. The musicality is a tad wonky, but THIS - HAS - SUBSTANCE!! Well done! Much enjoyed.

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

I really liked it, honestly.

[Samyuktha binod]

true! sometimes in life everything seems black and white, you lose the ability to see the colour in things.
"holding into the only light you have, keep holding. It may lead to a sky full of lights. The end tells us to keep moving.

[Tracey~]

We all let pieces of ourselves go here and there but I love that you say that she holds on to what is right. Her knowing will keep her safe. And I love the sweater... with the rose colored view.. well done..

[klawrites]

Thank you so much :)