far away friend

Like takes you to different places but the important stuff will stay.

Since we became friends
We've been stuck like glue
Some may even say
That I'm obsessed with you

Our memories are the perfect cure
To any hard times I may endure
From sleeping in cars
To staring up at the stars

We've traveled far and wide
Pass many border lines
Just to be side by side
Because that's when the world shines

So, today, on your day
I'm grateful for all that you are
You're perfect in every way
Even if you're so f*****g far!

Author's Note

Short and sweet! Let me know what you think!

Reviews

[Temporal light]

True I hope that you keep every one alive in memory
I'm sure that you know the saying
Even if I don't understand you
Do I know you

[Bear]

Interesting rhyme scheme, was it planned or did it just turn out this way? Oh, borderlines is one word. Consider personalising this line (Because that's when the world shines) "Because that's when our world shines". This line is confusing (So, today, on your day) I'm not sure what you trying to say but it could just be me.

I have read 4 or 5 of your poems this afternoon and while I haven't left comments, I like the energy and emotion you write with. Your soliloquies show you write with a real interest in the topics as well as an I dare to dream quality to your work. You work is entertaining and thought provoking, it has been a pleasure spending the afternoon with you and your works of literature :~)

[Coyote Poetry]

Faraway friend are still friends. I like the positive place and thoughts in the poem. Good to be thankful the people who are kind to us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SuspectGray]

I think you're a hopeless romantic....that's not just based on this musing but on others of yours that I have read.

[klawrites]

That's not such a bad thing to be... Is t?

[terry smith]

Love it!!!! I had a best friend that went to korea and when he came back it was like he never left!