Wild innocence

Something tiny I've been working on. Undecided on completion.

Wild innocence is for me

For now I do what I have done
I jump, because I know the fun

We dismiss scents of ignorance
These toxic delights rest in wild innocence 

Reviews

[Alex Boyd]

Short, sweet, and too the point... Being oneself flaws and all... Individual choices is just that individual choices and we as people should want to experience both the good and the bad... Not limiting ourselves but going all out for it is just simply freedom that we all lack as humans. I love it great work..

[klawrites]

Thank you! I agree, I love the 'live life to the fullest' mentality...

[Alex Boyd]

Yeah I have a couple of motto Live Young While Dying Able (something I can up with) then there's "Non, je ne regrette rien" French for "No, I regret nothing." also "Capre Diem" latin for "Seize the day" so yeah I am a big fan of living in the moment. Though I am hypocritical because I, myself do not live in the moment. I am caution and very indoor the only time I live in the moment is when it comes to love for I am a hopeless romantic, so yeah lol.

[klawrites]

Great words to live by :) Many people use external pleasures to connect with themselves. Weather it be music, food, and of course drugs. But love is so sacred. Being a romantic should be celebrated.

[Lizzie Mitchell]

I love the poetic verbiage that seems to always be incorporated in your work
from what I've read of your work you tend to have a few key brilliantly worded lines that make me read and re-read.

[klawrites]

So kind, Lizzie :) Thank you! I'm glad you're reading and enjoying.

[JD Jessop]

I really like this one. Lots of themes going on in such a short piece. Great use of varied vocabulary to get your point across. Scents of Ignorance...........very nice.

[klawrites]

Thank you!! :) :)

[Jeffrey David]

ah..the wild innocence....one of the wonders of life. A time when you are truly living, and experience life. Your writing really captures this.

[klawrites]

Its a bitter sweet time! Thank you :)

[Luximir]

Very nice! Short but it holds so many emotions, ideas and concepts of life. Great write, like it a lot :)

[klawrites]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks a lot :)

[Luximir]

No problem, and I very much did enjoy it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the want and hope in the words. Wild innocence is the bonus in a long life. Lack of fear and testing life. The best days. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[klawrites]

Thank you :) I've also enjoyed reading your work, so your support is much appreciated!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. I like how you write and think.

[A. Amos]

I always enjoy the message in your poetry...amazing!

[klawrites]

Thank you for the support! :)

[ksscampos]

Once you learn the pleasures, it is tough to keep from repeating. Your wild innocence can't contain the fun of the jumps..
I love your metaphors in your poems. such a skill to use!

[klawrites]

One of life's many struggles! Thank you for the kind words. xo