How to be a Heartbreaker

I would say that I'm sorry,

If only it were true.

But quite honestly darling,

I really thought you knew.

For when I stole your heart,

I thought it would be fun

I thought it would be grand

I'd thought I'd finally won.

But then I soon realized

that my love for you was fake.

It was, indeed, my dear,

Quite a huge mistake.

So, I would say that I'm sorry

But honestly I'm not.

Who are you again, darling?

I've already forgot.

Reviews

[Bakari Bruce]

Whoa, you are quite the poet. This is the second poem of yours that i read. Very nice on the last two lines. it is some good stuff. add or subtract a syllable here or there for better flow. The flow is already great, so take my advice or leave it. its your poem, your style and its still superb.

[kkv123]

I see what you're saying. I read you're other comment as well. I really appreciate your feedback and compliments.