Homewrecker

It does not take your pain away,
It sucks the humanity out of you
Innocent, vulnerable as a baby
I have been looking for your soul for years,
Your eyes are filled with loneliness,
Nobody is there anymore

How can you save someone that is long gone?
Living in the past is the entrance to darkness
If you cease to be would you care?
Would you cry? Or would you finally find peace?
Close your eyes now, imagine the heavenly shelter that I have built for you,
and hear me whispering “ It is just a matter of time” .

Author's Note

I'd like some feedbacks :)

Reviews

[Tania]

Love this .. beautifully written

[kkellyn]

Aw thank you :)

[Lizardo]

Makes me think: ''What would happen if I die, What Would I find out?''
This is really an interesting and amazing piece of work!
You did a great job writing this one1

[kkellyn]

Thank you :)