Nostalgia

As I walk through the park, my mind keeps going back to you
Was it real? Or was it all in my head?
A charismatic look, an angelic voice I was doomed from the start,
I remember this cold evening, you were waiting for me,
I observed you from a distance everyone around you was blurred
Sometimes I wished that our paths never crossed
Will I see you again? Or was it all?

It is now summer time, this cold evening is now seasons away from me,
But I still remember every detail of it,
I can feel the sun on my skin, I can see happy couples holding hands,
I want to let you go, but my heart is stubborn
Will you tell him the truth?, Tell him that he has been a fool  that feelings can’t disappear in the blink of an eye
I dare you to look me in the eyes one last time,
But everything is so far away now,
I see you holding hands with a much prettier girl than me,
You do not glance at me, not once
As I walk away from you, the sound of my heartbeat fades away

Reviews

[prince digbani]

Confident? Ha
You should be because you penned sometime nice. like previous reviewer noted "its powerful and wonderful"
keep it up

[kkellyn]

Oh thanks :)

[Lizardo]

This is a very sad poem, it really got to my heart.
But it tis wonderful, powerful, and everything the ends with 'ful' haha
I love this poem, thank you for sharing this good piece of poetry

[kkellyn]

I'm not really confident about my writing, but thank you for your comment I'm really touched.