Let me weep;

This poem is about releasing pain.

A creative name, a secretive touch;

Caress nature, tantrums much.

Ocean eyes and soothing voice,

I lost him in the chaos and noise.

Let me hold you tight for the last time, just for the last time.

                Now,

Even the rose petals are loosing colors while waiting for you.

but I'd rather prefer white roses over red.

My eyes are breaking glasses while waiting for you,

& the broken glasses are poking me till I bleed,

Let me weep

Let me weep

& LET ME WEEP.

Reviews

[slfisher89]

Exquisite poem; love the melodic feel and captures a sense of longing very well

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Strong graphic imagery at the end of this. Well-written. It really points to your longing for someone and releasing the pain of doing so. As I said, I found this very well-written. tyfs