Thunderstorm

Just a small assignment from my 8th grade language arts class...

_{As I look up I see}

_{The sky opening over me}

_{Our God above looks down in shame}

_{Releasing all the hurt and pain}

_{His tears come down upon my head}

_{And he lashes out with anger red}

_{His shouts streak across the sky}

_{Even God sometimes needs to cry}

 

_{He looks down on us}

_{What have we done}

_{With this earth? We have only one}

_{We have dissappointed}

_{But he will forgive}

_{We are sons and daughters of his}

 

_{The sky becomes a blanket of night}

_{Animals gather together in fright}

_{God moans and weeps and shakes his head}

_{His screams fill my heart with dread}

_{The air around grows damp and cold}

_{I see a flash, quick and gold}

 

_{But behold, the sky becomes light blue}

_{The trees grow calm and stand upright}

_{His promise appears above us all}

_{God nods his head, everything will be alright}

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Great imagery...i really enjoyed reading this
Great Job

[Petunia]

WOW deep. Very...um...what's the word...illusionary is all i'm coming up with although i'm almost positive that isn't correct (or even a word ;) ). The point is that i could see everything as i read it. XD

[Samantha.]

i love it
it's beautiful