No Cut Off Point

I need to edit this yet, but its basically about my boyfriend and I, and our conversation about no matter what the other does we'll still be united...

"Forever

Come heaven or hell."

Thats what we said,
And revelled in the implications
Wide eyed and slightly fearful
Hands clutched tight, palms together.

So what could I do
To irritate you?
Lately I've shouted and you've cried
Lately you've turned away and I've nearly died
So what possible action could be done,
To show me you just aren't the one?
Lately we've talked at the base of a treetrunk, curled up in the shade
Lately we've tenderly kissed to say sorry, to let the arguments fade
Away.

"Baby will you

Marry me?"

Thats what you whisper,
And I laugh because you don't mean it, never will
Sad eyed I realize you're too immature, for this serious feeling
Hearts clutched tight, minds so far apart.

What would you like,
If I was yours privately for the night?
I could sensually touch my lips to your neck and you could smile in delight
You could wrap me up in your strong warm arms and I could feel the stirrings of love reignite
What do you believe I would prefer
If ever the perfect occasion was to occur?
I could cook you something delicious and you could thank me in so many kisses I feel more than dizzy,
You could turn the shower on and tell me "iz buiznezz timee", and I could slowly grin and get busy.
Quickly.

"Promise me, you'll be there for me,
Promise me, if I couldnt buy you things, you wouldnt leave
Promise me, when youre on your own, I'm the only one you're thinking of
Promise me, that these promises never die, that we'll survive."

Thats what I mostly need,
But we both know that all those things are nothing new,
Our memories, send me to sleep
My only wish is that I could hold you tight, 'till the morning light.

My dreams are only of you
Spiced with days gone past
Such as when we ran so hard and fast through the sunshine
Or sprinted through the rain that night
I remember everytime you've been in my room,
And all the romantic things we did too,
I can effortlessly recall, our first kiss and the angels chorus that followed
Our first real date when we were "allowed", and how you were so nervous and it made me proud
I will never forget, the melody in your husky voice
Or the way I feel everytime your eyes meet mine
My heartbeat races when you're close to me, and we're alone in a darkened room
After all this time, the passion still makes my control lose
I can't help but to think daily of the time you first placed your hand in mine,
And promised to love me for all time
 

I used to think that when you were gone,
I would be alone forever
I used to believe one day, you'd leave me 
But now I see, never
Will you be able to walk away.
You will follow me, and I will lead the way.
But for when I fall down, and when I finally let this heavy, poisonous shell drop
You will take me in your arms with love, and carry me
Until I stand by your side and we are equal in mind
Aiming for the same destination
Never parting during the journey

"Forever

Come heaven or hell."

Reviews

[Kennedy]

WOW. That was deep... and amazing. It's so heart-felt. I love how you've emphasized certain areas of text as well. Everything you said was just so powerful... this is very well written and definitely going in my favorites. Great work!

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

It's kind of scary how much you and stephen remind me of me and ash....

Another wonderful heartwrenchingly pretty piece :)
please come to a poetry workshop this summer!!