Oh Montague

It seems, my dear

That you have fallen for me

What an interesting twist of fate

What a nice pawn to play.

Yet now I believe, my lover

That I have fallen for you

How dreadful and unsightly

How undeniably exciting.

Capulet, Montague

Deny thy father, and refuse thy name

What a troublesome snare we hath fallen into

Yet against all odds, our promised oasis shimmers.

Would'st thou leave me so unsatisfied?

You have the cheek to say

I should think so, Romeo

What satisfaction wouldst I possibly give today?

Love is fair, considerate and kind

Yet we hath ran through the battlefield blind;

Tasting your scent, our limbs entwined

I truly trust we will mend the odium of mankind.

Reviews

[DC Gentleman]

This is very cretive... I love your poetic voice..

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

I love it! :D So lovely and i love the voice of your writing.It kinda reminds me of one of my poems. 'Mr. Capulet'

^^

[Secondhand Tink]

Omdz this is like wowness Kirstums I love it loads, it flows so perfectly.

Bravo Bravo! :D