Three Little Words

8 little letters

make three little words

two little spaces

and one little dotted curve

8 little letters

make one big word

without any spaces

without any reserve

 

you say those three little words

and I may say them in return

but please tell me "darling"

what substance, if any, is laid in those words

 

overrated, jaded, dissuaded

far too easily

 

You know when you say those

three

little words to me?

Honey....

I just don't believe

 

Reviews

[Secondhand Tink]

Once again, excellent write Kirst, totally loved the theme and the way it's constructed, so short yet totally captures the way love is just strewn about these days.

Bravo gorgeous.

Also great rhyming :]]

Much love.

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

s'all pretty and rhythmic! I like the rhyme too.

So true. those words are supposed to have so much meaning but they get thrown about so easily nowadays.

[Poeticpiers]

interstingly constructed and presented. Your theme is only too true too often. Much easier to say than to mean