Poem For The Undignified Dumpers

Not my situation at all

Sometimes we must accept....

That life goes on

 

No. That won't do.

 

 

How about....It's not me, its you

 

Oh wait, thats supposed to be the other way around...

 

 

I'm terrible at this breaking up lark

And I must admit I feel quite cruel

Yet How do I tell you?

 

 

How can I tell you my heart no longer shivers

When you glance in my direction
Even when your hands are all about me?

How can I tell you I wish to tear our dreams apart

That I see my future without any spark

If I remain with you?

 

So how would you like to be told that my eyes no longer glimmer

With every comment about you, everytime someone whispers your name

How on earth, is it possible, that the love that I proclaimed

Staked my name upon, forever more, has faded, and shrivelled, and every other cliché?

 

 

And this is not reflecting, on you my dear boy

But sometimes a bird, just has to spread its wings and fly

I'll be thinking of you, and I know I'll regret it

But things aren't the same, so valentines day......

Just forget it.

Reviews

[Secondhand Tink]

Excellent write, really an excellent poem about breaking up, coz it really is a difficult thing to do, yet you tell such a great little story of how conflicted you felt and then your final point that 'sometimes a bird, just has to spread its wings and fly.' Is so so perfect when talking about such a scenario as this.

Excellent :]] and I love how you used those little cliches at the beginning coz you always get the idiots that use those XD

Much love,