Dying To Be Alive

I'm dying to be anyone, anywhere

Instead of me and my shape

I'm just dying to tell you anything, everything

Instead of silence of nothing

I'm already dying just sititng here, there, everywhere

Alone in a crowd with my head about to explode

 

Cant you see I'm not alive

Can't you see the lies

I hide behind

I never thought I'd do this again

Never thought this mask would make me pretend

Can't you see I'm not alive

 

I'm dying to see a face, i dont know

And have it look at me like im the only thing worth living for

I'm just dying to tell someone that I'll be there for them

Just cause they love me, unconditionally

I'm already dying without poison kisses and trembling touches

Alone in a crowd with my head about to explode

 

Can't you see I'm not alive

Can't you see the lies

I hide behind

I never thought I'd do this again

Never thought this mask would make me pretend

Can't you see I'm not alive

Reviews

[poetdweller]

good job. very nicely. I also agree wish shadow, you need to keep up at it. XD.

[Secondhand Tink]

I agree with shadow, u really are talented i used to be able to write poem after poem but i wrote myself out, and have found fan fics are fun too ^_^

keep up the gr8 wrk i will read all of ur writing 2night.

love you bbe, xxx

[Anonymous Shadow]

emotive, and incredibly well written.
keep it up hon, there's a lot of talent inside that pretty shell ^_^
shadow.