Irony

A few babbling thoughts.....

I'm the first girl to draw hearts on the desk

With the notebook graffitied within an inch of its life

Theres a fine line baby between my passion and my wrath

So tread carefully and dont make a sound

 

I'm the first girl to flirt outrageously

And lie through my teeth, cuz i am just oh so mean

I've got shamelessness down to a science

My concience is in Spain so wont you come to Poland?

 

I'm the first girl to think that we'll last forever

And watch the curtain close with sobs or fabulous fevour

The tombstone was waiting like I knew it would be

Now we're buried ten feet under I need a new "him" for me

Reviews

[Secondhand Tink]

I agree with everyone before me XD you do write bitter amazingly well and in general you write amazingly well I love it kirsty i really do

love you bbe

[Anonymous Shadow]

i have to agree with jackiekins. it does sound like a few of the lines are inspired by fall out boy, but in a good way ^^
this is a really good piece; i like the dirty pretty in it, since it really adds that "something special" factor to it.

keep it up
shadow.

[Spilled Her Guts in Cur..]

honey, when it comes to bitter you simply do it best. Fall out boy inspired lines yes?

deep. wow so about you lolx love it!