pixel or pixie

pixel or pixie

A Poem by kitty blur
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wrote this in a coffee shop where there was so much space on the other side of my table

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let's f**k each other metaphysically
because somewhere between us is the answer to why
my life is like a crystal ball or a slow pendulum or a carousel
just repeating the future which is also really the past
depending on how full the holy grail is on any given day 
because somewhere between us is a handful of dying stars
which are actually the reason why i think that i have to 
protect myself a lil from yr ultra-violet smirk in the daylight 
and now it's a question of: are u just a pixel or am i just a pixie or both
because somewhere between us is a lucid description
of sugar dissolving very slowly in a handful of yr spit + poison
or of ice gaining enough energy to melt or of blood itself
and i want to know it and understand it thru learned intuition
don't u want to peel me apart and seductively lick my Soul
don't u want to pull open my sternum and play w my lungs
don't u want to raise my eyebrows w just a wink or a whimper
don't u want to feel me and/or know me in every sense of the word
tbh i'm just waiting for u to take me hard on a bed of flowers

© 2016 kitty blur


Author's Note

kitty blur
hi, i'm feeling like using a lot of metaphors and adjectives today

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metaphors can often be fun, though let me tell you, that first line really took me offguard lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really enjoyed reading your poem.Such a beautiful poem. Imagery was excellent. It is well written expressed. Keep up the good work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Ur amazing. I would buy ur s**t if you published. The end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


WOW!!!! This is really good. Very passionate but also very artistic. Real and raw, but also well refined. Well done and very beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so cool. I love your use of metaphor. Great imagery as well. You're such an expressive writer.

Posted 8 Years Ago


A perfectly honest write about passion, praise the Heavens! I haven't been on to review much poetry lately, but now that I've stumbled upon your work, I have that much more motivation & curiosity. I should really review every piece you write, I say that only due to the pure talent and power of honesty that you let bleed out through your fingertips. Passion between two is such a beautiful, but delicate thing nowadays, but it's worth it with the right person. I also enjoy some of the dark stuff you write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Love it!
Yeah, not much more to say.
Love it!
Great poem, you should have WAY more reviews than you do.
It will come...

Posted 8 Years Ago


kitty blur

8 Years Ago

Aw, thank you. :)
I like this poem. I felt it more than I actually understood it. I loved your vocabulary, and I enjoyed the conversational yet poetic tone you used; it really added a sense of freedom and expression to the somewhat romantic, sexy vibe. The first line, for example, was special in a way that I can't explain, and it really set the mood for the rest of the poem. It's like you're drunk and rambling every romantic pick-up line you can think of while trying to maintain a hint of sophistication, and the fact that you wrote this at a "coffee shop when there was so much space on the other side of the table" kinda adds some craziness to it. I liked it. This poem gave me a weird feeling, but I enjoyed it. Very interesting, unique read.

-William Liston

Posted 8 Years Ago


kitty blur

8 Years Ago

Haha, I totally see what you mean about the being drunk and spilling out pick-up lines that I'm tryi.. read more
William Liston

8 Years Ago

You're welcome.
Jo Billygoat

8 Years Ago

What can be said that so many have already said. Made me laugh, think and appreciate another artist.. read more

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Added on June 8, 2016
Last Updated on June 9, 2016
Tags: metaphysics, holy grail, sugar, intuition, sex, lol

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