Gloomy Compared To Me

I was sad. No surprise, I guess

The days are gray and the nights are black,

I feel the sun is about to attack.

The sun is bright and the moon is dark,

when it shines so bright it hurts my heart.

The sky is blue but my heart is red,

my mind, my thoughts, my feelings are dead.

The rain is wet but the wind is cold,

the houses, the trees stand out so bold.

The days are slow with not many reasons,

with Summer, Winter, Fall and other seasons.

The months are strange and so are the years,

There are things that I hide like my feelings and my fears.

My days are getting older and my hair has grown more,

my body, my bones are beginning to grow sore.

My eyes are weak but my ego is strong,

sometimes its hard telling right from wrong.

My eyes are big and so are my feet,

I don't come in like a wimp, I come in with heat.

My skin is like a Hershey, brown and pretty,

whenever I feel sad I want chocolate not pity.

There are things in the world that you may like about me,

There are also things in the future that I hope to see.

Today's not the day because I'm clearly an obsession,

I'm falling deeper and deeper into this horrible depression.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

Dark, honest, sad in a few spots, but over all very well written.