Hold on

Hold on

A Poem by Bellarina

Dreams are nothing to believe in

They're all just phony visions

Things we wish we could have in life

But instead, we get collisions

 

Faith is nothing to hold on to

For it can easilly slip away

When no one is there

Who honestly cares?

 

When you find your hope

It'll lose it's way

Disappear again

Gone for another day

 

If he's there and you know it

You love him, but don't know how to show it

You're tested everyday

All you feel is dismay

 

Hold on to that last bit of hope

You never know

It could be what saves your life

Or it could cause your own demise

© 2008 Bellarina


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i thought it was gona end with kind of a glimmer of happiness hahaha but then the last line just shot that down........ i like but you got to watch........ that you dont fall into the pit of downers cause theres alot of cliche pieces out there...... that fall into the pit

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Bellarina
Bellarina

Raleigh, NC



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I'm Sabrina. Recently turned 22 years old. I've been writing ever since I was a child but only chose to start keeping track of it at the age of 15. I tend to stray from magical based writings. They al.. more..

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