Forget Me Not

Forget Me Not

A Poem by The Devil's Own B***h
"

I will haunt your dreams...

"

I watch you walking by

Pretending that you don’t see me.

But I know you did,

Because of the way

You pulled her closer,

Trying to see what I would do.

I don’t want you,

So please, by all means

Continue as you were.

I hope that you have a good life

And that she is the one for you.

But don’t,

Don’t ever forget me

And how you took away

My one chance of happiness.

Don’t ever forget her name.

Never forget me, Philip,

Because I will haunt

Your every dream…

 

Copyright©JosieWentzel26June08

 

© 2008 The Devil's Own B***h


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Dum dum DUM...

Very direct and straightforward...oh, and vengeful.
Good use of 'Philip' straight after "Don't ever forget her name".
Line breaks work well to make it a drawn-out read.

Overall, good work.





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The Devil's Own B***h
The Devil's Own B***h

Roodepoort, South Africa



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My name is Josie and I am what people term 'weird'. I love my poetry; reading; writing; and being miserable. I know, that sounds odd, but misery is what I know and enjoy most in life. It's been a b.. more..

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