I Flew Away Again

I grew up

that's all,

nothing more.

I ran away

to the sea,

to my core.

You followed me;

your wild heart

love it bore. 

But I grew up,

I flew away,

your heart I tore.

Piece by piece,

stitch by stitch,

till you were sore.

And I was gone,

gone again,

with nothing more. 

Reviews

[ScottWinchester]

Oh man.

You've got crazy talent.

I'm pouring through all of your stuff now lol.

[Danielle]

Smooth flow, Very nice!

[forevermore1218]

a simple rhyme that describes a feeling that can kill you.

loved it dude :)

[victoria]

a deceivingly simple rhyme that without due attention appears to gloss over the complexities of love an life herein. Wonderful

[kayla]

I like this(: I like the rhymne scheme and the emotions within it.