Untouched

These marks on my wrists
Are not my doing.
These feelings in my mind
Are out of my control.
I'm just a girl
A simple, simple girl
Who got mixed up
In the wrongs of the world.
I tried so hard
To evaid the hands of the greedy,
The mad and the evil,
But they were too quick;
There sences too sharp
For a girl like me.
Oh how I wish things were different
How I dream of having back
My spirit and will.
But I know-
As I sink down into the tub,
And as water covers my face-
That I, a pebble in a rock quarry,
Will never be found.

Reviews

[Chris]

a surreal goodbye... as you float and then sink ...away

[DalainaRenee]

Very nicley written

[Julia]

great write..i really enjoyed reading this . i can relate in a few ways...loved the last few lines particularly . keep up the great work:)

[Alex Miller<3]

Beautiful and I completely get where you're coming from, amazing write.

[paradise]

Beautiful and sad

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So very nicely written, I enjoyed this write.

[shanemusic]

I like this a lot :) very well written. I liked the last couple of lines. The imagery with the bathtub and the pebble are very cool. Thanks for writing.