Falling

Falling.

How would it feel to be falling?

Falling from the highest cloud,

Falling from the tallest building.

Would you scream?

or go peacefully 

accepting your fate?

Falling

what would it feel like?

would you feel like a bird,

soaring through the sky?

or like a stone,

plumiting down, down

with nothing to stop you?

Reviews

[Lowesy]

i imagine falling would feel wet..... and smell of vomit..... i'm scared of heights so i'll probably wet myself and vomit the entire way down!
just a quick point, 6th line down, piecfuly... peacefully? :D good write

[Brookell▲]

I like it. Good poem. (Peacefully) you spelled it piecfuly. Other than that its good.

[Carl Thomas]

Like a stone, I imagine. Nice poem.