Is love alive

Is love alive,
When no one's there to see it?
When you have no one to share it with?
Do our ships sink,
When the one we can't live without leaves us?
When they don't love us?
Does summer still exist,
When our life is as cold as ice?
When we've frozen to the point of no return?

Is love alive?

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

Finding the right person who’s on the same page to share your life with makes love come alive. Nice work.

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"Is love alive,
When no one's there to see it?"
~a very philosophical question~
But love is always alive, even if we
are too disheartened to see it.
~"Do our ships sink,
When the one we can't live without leaves us?"
~~U expressed your emotions beautifully here, and
set a mood of questioning wonder at the same time.
~a great piece of work !~

[serpent]

you have quite beautifully penned all those questions that we ask ourselves during those touch times...love being a very complex yet an immortal emotion lives forever...no doubt that it ceases to flow inside us when people we love walk out on us...but that's what love is all about... its painful not to be loved by someone you love however not loving them or thinking that love is dead is not the right thing to do...

these questions can only be answered when you feel that painfully beautiful emotion once again.
(PS: it's just a humble opinion...)

[Greg Skura]

Yes! It emanates from all that is! Great little poem!