My story is about two friends who has met unexpectedly and became very close friends but every time they meet they feel that they were meeting for the first time.
My story begins with a girl named "Akshara" who is been friendly with every one and she is a very jovial kind of a girl,want to spend a lot of time with friends,as akshara goes to college only to make fun around. And wants to live her life the way she wants to,as akshara is a day dreamer who always dreams about her future ("like wants to get a good job in a good organization and then live a good life by making lots and lots of fun around.But akshara got used to make compromises with her life by considering her family,she had left her happiness only for her family by the situations she has faced before. when her life is been going in a normal way suddenly her life has become more excited by meeting a friend and a well wisher a guide who has met her for a project work.she is Akrithi who works as a software consultant in an organization. Akrithi is very different from akshara as akrithi is a very calm,cool,workaholic,smart,talented,but very sweet kinda girl. As they both meet at an organization for a project related work,so akrithi used to guide akshara for completing the project.
First off I would like to be the first to welcome you to Ink Pages and hope you make many new friends. Now down to business. I noticed you making the mistake of not adding a space after your comas when you use the word "as". Second not sure by using your slang diffination "fun all around." Needs to be more clear most poeple myself included like things spelled out.. just a clear idea up front only once is all you need.
Love the story idea and can't wait to see where it takes you. And brovo on giving the characator name and intro letting us know your intention
I will remind you as to the rule of thumb or a golden rule to note. If you want reviews read and review others including mine What's.Behind The Looking Glass series. And. With that I wish you well and welcome. Sorry if I mispelled anything kindle does not have spell check. And only let's me view emails not reply or write them. But I can comment all I want.
First off I would like to be the first to welcome you to Ink Pages and hope you make many new friends. Now down to business. I noticed you making the mistake of not adding a space after your comas when you use the word "as". Second not sure by using your slang diffination "fun all around." Needs to be more clear most poeple myself included like things spelled out.. just a clear idea up front only once is all you need.
Love the story idea and can't wait to see where it takes you. And brovo on giving the characator name and intro letting us know your intention
I will remind you as to the rule of thumb or a golden rule to note. If you want reviews read and review others including mine What's.Behind The Looking Glass series. And. With that I wish you well and welcome. Sorry if I mispelled anything kindle does not have spell check. And only let's me view emails not reply or write them. But I can comment all I want.
I am Postgraduate from Hyderabad and love to write poetry and stories.Wanted to spend a lot of time at any hill station.I love Nature.And i think that I am a very good natured kinda girl and love to .. more..