I Hope You Don't Mind

yep.

I hope you don’t mind that I put down in words my feelings for you,

It’s just that you are every wish I’ve longed to come true.

You are the only one that could ever be for me,

You’re the only one that will ever do.

 

I always find it amazing that no one can see,

That river of love between you and me.

That spark of electricity that jumps when we bump hands,

How the touch of your skin makes me more excited than I should be.

 

For someone like you, I’ve searched the land,

Sorting through as many people as grains of sand.

But then, finally, I came across you,

And my heart beat loud as a marching band.

 

So now here I am, writing my feelings for you,

However unsure I am that you feel like I do.

I don’t mind, because we are friends,

And that love will last until the end.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I love the purity of this poem. I love the way simple yet elegant way you wrote this. The emotions are there, plain and raw. It's a very good read.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[St.Jimmy]

this is so sweet and comfortable to read
You've written it so smoothly and with a perfection, Kudos!
I adore your scheme
1st two lines are rhymed and the third one is kept aside and then the last one is rhymed with them
i also sometimes use this kind of rhyme scheme
it's really a great sentimental poem
i can sense the emotions flowing out
and also you have a great choice of words
Good work Abigail
~Aaradhya

[Antonio Valentino]

This is very sweet Abigail, and he better not mind, if he does, then he's probably not the right guy, but then what do I know?

Very nicely done!
Antonio