The Stars' Secrets.

this was written at midnight and makes no sense, but i like how it sounds like it's meant to be metaphorical or something. =D

 I walk among the lonely stars of hate and love and fear,

Listening to their secrets as they weep their shining tears.

Wandering through the pages of the book of life and wisdom,

Strolling casually through and past the almighty gods’ kingdom.

 

The stars, they weep their tears for things that stay the same,

But I, the human, weep for what is left to remain.

Longing for the pieces of the fallen stars to mend,

People cry and laugh and shout into letters to be sent.

 

Stumbling through lives of heavenly bodies from beyond,

Swimming through dangers like fish through their pond.

Floating up to the sky to join the burning stars above,

I leave behind and forget all the things I know and love.

 

Moments or days later, or maybe even years,

I look down upon the world and notice everyone’s tears.

Now I walk among the lonely stars of hate and love and fear,

Telling them my secrets as I cry my shining tears.

Reviews

[Lorraine]

I love the imagery that took me into a world scattered with stars. On the surface level, it seems so much like an adventurous and imaginative dream but on a deeper sense, it seems to mean something more. There's something magical in the way you wrote it.

Keep Writing. ^___^

[Arthur Crow]

I found this quite facinating and ethereal.. like floating in a milkyway of emotion. Enjoyed your rhyme and flow, the stanzas are solid and all work very well.