Beat The S**t Out of Me

emotional massochism

Fistful of hair
Mouthful of lies
Faithful compromise

Beat me
Because I asked you to
Hate me
Because I want you to
Trust me
I've never given you a reason to
Fistful of flaws

Beat

The

S**t

Out

Of

Me

At this moment.
Its what I need

To escape the emotional pain
I feel
Every day

Please
Don't kiss it better
Please
Leave me on the floor

Like the w***e I am

Beat

The

S**t

Out

Of

Me

It's what i need

Hurt me
Hurt me
Hurt me

Beat

The

S**t

Out

Of

Me Physically

I have the emotional beating
Down

Reviews

[Miss Christine]

Well-written view from the submissive side of the slashmark. Wonderful contradictions, giving depth and interest to the character of the narrator. I especially like "Trust me / I've never given you a reason to". Both straightforward and complex. Lovely.

[Red_Queen]

Wow. what else can i say.


not much thats for sure it was wonderful.

[Star Catcher]

I love it - it conveys the emotions of self-hate so well.

[Wolfwind Words]

I can't begin to understand why! But thats ok. I liked the way this poem was writen. It was fast and flowed strait on through. It was like someone falling down from the heights onto the floor below. I could easily imagine the agression of the other, and how the pain was pleasure itself. Good Write!

[The Archangel Gabriel]

I love the conflageration of a whirlwind of emotions in this work! It is a dramatic culmination of confusion and mixed emotions. Great write!

-Gabe

[Roy]

Well, well, well ... novel structure ... I've read something so different after quite some time ...

[Breezie Kae]

Nice poem. :)