January

January

A Chapter by Carter Meyer
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The lies we tell ourselves.

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“I’m fine,” she whispers,
stirring her coffee with a plastic straw - 
her eyes wide and wandering,
dreaming of someplace else.


© 2011 Carter Meyer


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Wow. You packed so much into like 2 senteces. So beautiful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ok. This is still making me wonder what happens next........

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good god. I really love your work, sure, but this one is just... stunning. Such an intricate picture is painted with so few words. So far, this is my favorite. But I do have more of your work to dive into, and I can't wait.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This a miniature story in itself. Very intriguing. It makes me wonder who she is with, where she wants to be, and why she seems so unhappy.

Posted 13 Years Ago


ah yes, i think we've all told that infamous lie 'i'm fine'. nicely done

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Liar" I whisper back
Dragging my coat off the chair
And walk out
Letting stale silence
Linger in her drink

Love this!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


SHORT AND POWERFUL! In four lines you told an entire story. A deep internal struggle, a harsh realization. INCREDIBLE CARTER! Absolutely incredible. I'm a novelist, for me to do what you've just done is positively impossible. Wow. . .that's all I can say.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Mmm...these words do so much with so little.....
I love the second line in particular - "stirring her coffee with a plastic straw".....I feel the imagery here, it's like I'm next to the girl in the cafe I imagine in my mind....
good job...:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is interestingly intriguing, although short, it's descriptive and it captures a lot of what people do...nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 12, 2011
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Tags: poetry, creative writing, lies, depression, sadness, sad, lesbian


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My name is Carter Meyer and I have been writing since the age of five, although I become serious about it in middle and high school. I write about what inspires me: social issues, injustice, straight .. more..

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