Good god. I really love your work, sure, but this one is just... stunning. Such an intricate picture is painted with so few words. So far, this is my favorite. But I do have more of your work to dive into, and I can't wait.
SHORT AND POWERFUL! In four lines you told an entire story. A deep internal struggle, a harsh realization. INCREDIBLE CARTER! Absolutely incredible. I'm a novelist, for me to do what you've just done is positively impossible. Wow. . .that's all I can say.
Mmm...these words do so much with so little.....
I love the second line in particular - "stirring her coffee with a plastic straw".....I feel the imagery here, it's like I'm next to the girl in the cafe I imagine in my mind....
good job...:)
My name is Carter Meyer and I have been writing since the age of five, although I become serious about it in middle and high school. I write about what inspires me: social issues, injustice, straight .. more..