Elevator

Life is like an elevator,

Goes up and down,

As I step in, I see mirrors,

Sometimes ads,

Sometimes pretty wallpaper,

But OH! Whats that?!

The elevator,

Small,

Tight,

Boxy,

Sometimes stops,

I jump like a rabbit,

breathing heavy as we move,

No way to get out,

Only in,

I hear the elevator,

Seems to be laughing with a slight cough,

At me,

I try not to listen,

but it gets louder

Finally the doors open,

Never mind I am okay again,

Try again some other time,

Until then,

Stairs.

Reviews

[Serena Monteleone]

I really like the imagery that you used i this, and I really liked the way that you ended this! I think that you did a really great job :)

[Katie]

Aw thank you! I tried to be serious with a little funny at the same time.

[Serena Monteleone]

Well it was :)