The Invisible Mind

About my struggle with a disorder

My mind, the invisible mind
Strong and powerful,
Controlling and painful
Yet has the imagination of ones own
My own
It makes me do things I don't want to do
But I have to
I need to
Or else the threat that my mind put on me,
I believe will come true
Though it's crazy to think
But I can't help it
Yet I make it
my mind
The invisible mind
You can't see it and you don't know it's there
But I can
I can imagine anything I want
But Some of it I don't want
I try to trick it, but it always come back
Tricking me once again
Yet my mind
The invisible mind
Is a place for me to get away when things are rough
My own world, my own place
And I don't have to share it cause it's my own
My mind
The invisible mind
Strong yet powerful
Controlling yet it's my world
Painful, yet I know no one can see
But that hurts inside
Cause no one know the pain of the invisible mind
My invisible mind

Reviews

[smilempsn]

Interesting write..
I liked the way how you repeated those 'my mind.. my invisible mind' kinda.. Looks like a tone in a song :)

[Katie]

Thank you! I tried for that

[smilempsn]

well then it worked :)

[Katie]

Thank You!

[★ Starry]

Your invisible world in your inadvisable mind :3

[Katie]

yes thank you

[Nix]

A very interesting depiction of the mind. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

[Katie]

Why Thank you!

[Serena Monteleone]

Love it! Amazing job

[Katie]

aw thanks girl luv ya!