Lakeview Love Story book 1 chapter 2

Lakeview Love Story book 1 chapter 2

A Story by BikiniGirl1.0
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Dana takes action when she realizes she still has feelings for her ex.

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       As I walked towards Brad's house, I began to worry that he might still be mad. I didn't have time to worry though, because I was already at his front door. Before I rang the bell, I put on a fresh coat of lipstick and extra glittery eyeliner, which seriously boosted my confidence. Then I rang the bell. I waited for what seemed like years, but my ex eventually answered the door.
       "Can I help y-- Dana ?!" Brad exclamed. He looked suprised to see me. And more than a little dazed. He wasn't wearing a shirt, either. "Um... what are you doing here?" 
       "I was thinking, and I decided I want to get back together," I said. "Well? Aren't you gonna let me in?" I pushed past him into the house I could navigate with my eyes closed. 
       "You know," he smirked, "last time we were here alone, we were almost naked."
       "Well," I said, pulling my hottie towards his bedroom. "lets pick up where we left off!"
       "No, D, don't go in there, baby!" He sounded panicked. Why did he sound so panicked? Suddenly I understood. There was another girl naked in his room. 
       "Bradon John Wilson! What is going on!" the stranger and I screamed. 
       "Uh, yeah. I... uh... can explain this! You see, uh-" 
       "Forget it!" the stranger yelled. "Hand me my shirt. I'm leaving!" She stormed out of the room and left the house in tears.
       "Braden?" I said. "Why was she in your room?"
       "I'm sorry, D. I was trying to get over losing you." He really seemed sorry. "I feel really bad" 
       " You're forgiven." I said, partially because I believed him, partially because he was eyeing my b***s in a way that made me feel really good. "Come with me."
       "What?" He was definately still confused. 
       "We're sleeping together, now" I pulled him into his bed. 
       "Ok, babe. Your b***s look great today." He took of my shirt and bra as I ran my fingers across his chest. I kissed him and he kissed me back. He started to take his pants off but a loud knock interupted us. I was so close!

© 2013 BikiniGirl1.0


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Tell me your ideas and if I should write the next chapter or not. Still open to your ideas!

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You have a good pull through the scene.
you have potential.

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