Lakeview Love Story chapter 1 book 1

Lakeview Love Story chapter 1 book 1

A Story by BikiniGirl1.0
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A seventeen year old girl is asked out by her ex and realizes she still has feelings for him.

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Chapter 1
       It was near the end of November and I was walking home from Lakeview highschool. My ex, Brad,  just told me he wanted us to get back together. 
       "What happened?" squeeled Meagan.
       "Yeah, tell us!" begged Michelle.
       "Well," I said slowly. "He appologized-for like the billionth time- and said he still had feelings for me. Then told me Dawn and Adrianne are completely out of the picture and that I look really hot today." It wasn't a lie- I DID look hot today. I was wearing my favorite pair of skinny jeans (the pair with rhinestones on the butt) and a shirt cut so low I had to zip my jacket up all the way to be let into school. Now my jacket was open and my b***s bounced with every step I took. 
       "Are you two together again" Michelle inquired, practically jumping out of her high heeled stilleto boots.
       "Are you kidding? I'd be crazy to go out with him! He cheated on me."
       "You'd be crazy to turn him down! Dana, every girl in the tenth grade would kill to be you. You have beautiful red hair, you'r rockin' a dd, and you've been with Bradon Wilson since eighth grade!" Meagan fumed.
       "She'd just look desperate if she said yes now," Shelley whispered. She's always the quiet one.                                                  "Shelley's right." I agreed. "I'd just look desperate. But he is so hot! I wish we could have gone all the way!"
       "You're such a ho, D"
       "You actually did it with Jordan Fabrizi!"                                                                                                                                                    "Are you ever gonna let him back in?" 
       "Who, Brad? I dunno, maybe. I want to." I said with a grin, grinding like I would against my ex if we got back together. "I'm gonna go out with him and this time..." I let the sentence go unfinished for a few seconds. "...he's not gettin' away again!" I shouted, turning the corner towards Brad's house.

© 2013 BikiniGirl1.0


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Tell me anything you think needs improving and whether or not I should continue to the next chapter. I'm open to ideas.

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Next chapter please, thank you.

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