speak

speck in such wisper

cold as december morning

sliping slowly

years we build inside

my light my sorrow surrouding such cold words

speck love

as we fade away

falling away from home

empty cold words

what ive grown to know

passion and truth

now only a myth

to leave me stuck in those words

you once would speck

love fire desire lust hope happyness fear...but yet...trust

speak of nothing

words have lost there once warm touch

Author's Note

i do suck at spelling i know this and i gotta download the abc cheak but yea this peace right here is relatied to a recent ex if anyone can feel the same or have the same experiance id love to read what u have

Reviews

[Wolfhilde]

This is a very nice poem. Needs a spelling check indeed, but very good!

[Aly Sky]

"as we fade away; falling away from home" Those are my favorite lines. Yes I can relate to what you're saying in this piece. I don't have any written poetry on things like this, but now I am inspired to do so! Thank you! This is well written! Keep up the great work!

[The Mad Prophet]

I thought it was well writen, and I like that last few lines. I like how the rush of single words to flow, then expressed they have no meaning, brilliant. Thank you for sharing this piece of art.

[Debbie_Philly]

The only spelling typo is the word speak...2x's you wrote speck.... but guess what... im the same way...lol.
The poem is a beautiful work of art... straight from the heart with emotion and passion... I love it !!