Gossip.

Gossip.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A play on poetry I've been reading lately.

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Standing solid upon the breaking ground,

I yeild to nature and only her not others,

Branded science leaves me here to die,

Not along with friends or indeed mothers.

 

You've felt the strenght of my loving you,

I beg of you no to listen with eager rate,

Do not turn and feel the stab of eyes,

Really, you don't want to feel my hate.

 

Pleading vomit has been sent to kill me,

I slap at motions not riddled with grit,

No movement of legs controled my mind,

The wind now wisps and holds no hit.

 

Borders are failing when walls come up,

Two men refuse to see eye to thought,

Wisdom has no place for fighting war,

Women lend gossip to those already caught.

© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Honesty my darlings, honesty!

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I like it, its very true Thomas. I enjoyed reading this, it took me a little while to understand the full gist of it. But once I did I was in shock from it, its quite a powerful piece. Great work, get writing, you have quite a talented mystery from you. I like it. It'll take you far, good luck Thomas. (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It's exclusive, in depth and yet there's a very simple language and vocabulary, glad I could read it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


"Women lend gossip to those already caught."

i like the reality shown in this line

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent expression of how gossip can be so deadly!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I honestly don't see how it has to do with gossip. but I like the flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow this is very powerful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Nicely done here! I love it. It's a powerful piece. Gossip is deadly!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very good. You have a way with wording things so that I have to read it a few times to get the entire gist of it, but that just means you're a more talented writer than me! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


very heartfelt!

Posted 12 Years Ago


your words are easily understood, you write from your heart, and what i gather is life experience, great words Tom.


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Thomas Fitzgerald

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