The act.

A look at writing something sexual, without being vulgar, I've left this available for everyone to read, becasue as it does suggest something, it never refers directly to it!

Crafted hands mould muscles to tender softness,

Fingers caress skin of milk and velvet rich,

My back spasms at delight of his touch,

A moan, solid and low for only his ears my pitch.

 

Kisses float on lips of liars and of truths,

Bodies hardening against sweat and feeling,

Shoulders high as hands laid rest upon them,

Pushing in seduction and suggestions of kneeling.

 

Fantastic groans, like a farm aminal in heat,

He thrusts bulging organs against wetness,

Vacum creates tension at the back of my throat,

Playful fingers discover lines of skin of tightness.

 

Legs open and standing straight with upturned toes,

He rocks and shivers in excitment now relaxed  in flow,

I pulse and heat and go quicker with my rythm,

How funny that something is bastardised as in blow!

Author's Note

Be Honest!

Reviews

[Chris]

line 3 - "at" ? similar "distractions" at other places too. I sensed the intent but question the tepid facts but less emotion-full happenings. Its not the hetero or gay depiction I question... its the emotion-less that turns me away. Sex feels good OR we wouldn't do it (whatever the it is) near as much. But without emotional impact it becomes an inconsequential act without beauty, satisfaction, or release.

Heat without crudity is achievable and desireable... and memorable too.

Chris

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Wow! This definitely kept me on my toes!... very sensual and erotically titillating.
The heat radiates from your words. Nicely done!

[Poetic Beauty]

This is done in with great care. There is a very visual moments yet kept behind a veil from prying eyes. This is done with beauty and sensuality.

[Rohan Tandon]

Emotions attached or not, i think its a lovely read... extremely sensual... thanks 4 sharing

[Rene Velez]

Whether vulgar or not your style is unique in It's own, few can carry the weight of words like you do, excellent work.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great wording that built of a steamy passionate read!

[Kenneth The Poet]

A masterpiece I think. Quite sexual, but not perverse. A rousing write for sure.