Humanity!

A look into what I see humanity, flaws and all, looks like.

She waits in slumber deep and wide open,

Her heart makes silence against wishes,

Female prowess drip's ink of clear blood,

Little cubs do suckle from milk dishes.

His teeth leave pictures in prey to come,

He the father of all fathers this den,

Male dominance a farce to just the one,

Small pups cover the heads of these men.

A demon lurks around lies that be told,

No wings to be had for creatures of might,

Pieced eyes forever searching the ground,

Always wandering at the weak of no fight.

A God stands still for prayers to answer,

Many angels gather near to the faithful,

Solid souls remain with those in the sky,

Immortal even for the hosts of ungrateful.

Author's Note

This is a study of my own mind, as always be honest.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

It confuses me,
It's not your fault I am after all only 12 but it amuses me too
It keeps my mind at edge thinking and slowly not yet but slowly deciphering I like it!
Not too many things confuse me but thats why I like poetry hehe it's confuses me the most:)

Xoxoxox
Great read Hun!:)
~abbie
100/100

[Marie Harrison]

For some reason, I think this writing could be hinting at
the tragedy that happened on September 11th
The weakness of the victims and their families
That's what I read, as well as the
Viciousness of the attackers, which applies
To just another side of our humanity.
Nice poem

[Teri B]

There's a darkness here...male vs female, child vs adult, God vs demons. How hard it is to be human!

[Chris]

I honestly don't know yet how I feel to this, Your references are yours - culturally and unique and yet I have tastes because of the paths I've walked.
This will have to brew a bit.

Take care,
Chris

[Teri B]

Am sending you a private message.

[Shep]

The land of the wolves are hard the as any human life. For the soul does only belong to man. Nicely done.

[Kenneth The Poet]

A pretty levelheaded view of our species, I must say. Excellent for sure.