Humanity!

A look into what I see humanity, flaws and all, looks like.

She waits in slumber deep and wide open,

Her heart makes silence against wishes,

Female prowess drip's ink of clear blood,

Little cubs do suckle from milk dishes.

His teeth leave pictures in prey to come,

He the father of all fathers this den,

Male dominance a farce to just the one,

Small pups cover the heads of these men.

A demon lurks around lies that be told,

No wings to be had for creatures of might,

Pieced eyes forever searching the ground,

Always wandering at the weak of no fight.

A God stands still for prayers to answer,

Many angels gather near to the faithful,

Solid souls remain with those in the sky,

Immortal even for the hosts of ungrateful.

Author's Note

This is a study of my own mind, as always be honest.

Reviews

[Jane Doe]

It confuses me,
It's not your fault I am after all only 12 but it amuses me too
It keeps my mind at edge thinking and slowly not yet but slowly deciphering I like it!
Not too many things confuse me but thats why I like poetry hehe it's confuses me the most:)

Xoxoxox
Great read Hun!:)
~abbie
100/100

[ToxicMelody]

I cannot say that this poem was the best I've read of yours but what catches me is the deeper meaning that I don't even quite understand. The words flow wonderfully as well as the lines. I enjoyed this. Wonderful ink!

[Erica Daubert]

If this is a study of your own mind, holy s**t. there are like minded people out there. seriously. i was in awe while reading this. it's so intense. so true. so cynical, yet beautiful. it's the perfect medium between seeing beauty in the world and doubting it's out there at all. i love it.

[Thea]

*simply...

[Thea]

I simple love this piece...Wonderful imagery... :)))

[M.Babu]

I just loved the flow of this piece...it ensnared my attention and heightened my urge to keep reading it:D

Truly an engaging travel to the depths of the unknown and now known :)

~M.Babu~

[Tkess]

I think I see where you are going with this. It is a little esoteric, but the underlining bits are there. Regardless, it is an interesting write, and I think you made more than a few people on this site think. And, isn't that the point of writing poetry. To elicit that emotional response in people. Nice work.

[Ink Stained]

Images are interesting, but they are not a coherent whole. You mix nuturing, death, demons and God but there is no settlement on what you think this amounts to. Like abbie:), this confuses me and I am much older than 12.

[Rene Velez]

great images that pop, excellent wordplay, love the last two lines

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

love how your work always leaves me thinkng
great write

[Valentine]

I first though you were writing about a mother bear and her cubs..loved the last four lines..lola nd God bless..Kathie...trying to catch up on hundreds of requests..Kathie