Woman.

A subject craferd by many, this is my mere interprtation.

Why must I? Indeed they speak to you of promises that fly in the face of reason. I am not the worker ant of your hive my dear sweet fellow. Time begins tonight and you have an air of honesty that one find’s deplorable to reasoned thinking. Arrogance drives the ship of your mind and yet you kneel to those the same as you, or indeed ones that hide and claim brother hood.

 

You speak of destiny and fore told attitudes to species not created and you expect me to blindly afford you the right of superior wisdom. You're a fool, not onto intellect but to the survival of races to come. You not only serve a masked master, but lay the foundations of misery for all my kind. Millions, over eons will be tired, murdered and preyed upon because of your sense of unfounded weakness.

If we are to bear the minions to slay this planet are you not to bear fruit for the others, for the war of all mankind are forth coming, that is the only real absolute. He made us from grains of sand and yet you feel your sand more gritted than mine own. That and only that show your arrogance, debauched sulks plague your very existence and I mock you, for you are truly laughable.

From now, and until the end of time, I will never, true are my words, lay beneath you. You, my dearest Adam are no more than a construct for thousands and millions of brutal men to come, and I am your true equal, for I give birth to the woman to fight your stupidity, my weapon is the most deadly of all - knowledge, remember only one thing my sworn enemy, my name, Lilith!

Author's Note

Be honest.

Reviews

[reflectingus]

This is amazing. So expressive, and powerful, you have conveyed your vexation towards this woman, with perfect words, creating an artistic flow. I see your vocabulary is quite powerful, great job with that, and seriously, this is such a great way to let it all out.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

it's an endless power struggle...it's just nature.
I'm skeptical of the stories we are told as kids...because there are innumerable of them...most of them condradict each other...obviously each camp propagates its own versions...
to wish that women were treated equally would be unrealistic...unless they gain more power than men...but then they wouldn't treat men as equals...
In India, the ultimate form of God in most religions founded here is a lady...in Hinduism, it is the Shakti (whose chant I have posted in my profile)...and yet the actual women are treated nowhere like goddesses...
I'm not a revolutionary...but in my personal capacity I make sure I'm fair with everyone.

peace.

[Backlight Burner]

Wow, at first i was kind of confused but by the time i got to the bottom it makes since, i really liked this. interesting read :)

[patricia]

Bloody hell that was good, I couldnt help thinking it was a retaliation to the poem i wrote a couple of hours ago, called attitude...maybe it is jus a coincidence...if it isnt...then 2 shay! (sorry I cant spell. You are a superb writer. Thanks.

[deadlysilence]

very interesting but intriguing at the same time ! great job keep it up !

[BS Johnson]

I was a little lost to the writing as well. Not to say your writing was at fault, just that I am not as experienced to these types of poems, if you will. From what I gathered, however, it was well written.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I love the tone! What women have had to endure...it's nearly mind-boggling.

[Morning Star]

your work is beautifully expressed and truly interesting and unique
good choice of words and excellent flow
Excellent write!

[Tkess]

I can grasp astrophysics and the inter-workings of the human body, but when it comes to women I haven't learned a damn thing in my 30 years on this planet. Very interesting piece.

[Butterfly]

it's different as so is everything else, it seems to me that it needs a bit more work and effort, it lacks the material of emotions for me atleast. when writing poetry become one with it, become your emotions and write it!. but other than that it was decent

[Rene Velez]

really intriguing write, an enlightenment for me...