The Vampire

A subject that is indeed very close to my heart, as a fan of all things Vampire, I like to write on the context of the fantasy.

Those eyes fake lust in prey so hopeless,

A mere glance puts thoughts in his ear,

He yearns for the touch of warm skin,

Blood pulses in vessels so close to fear.

 

 

Less talk summing questions in those fortunate,

The gift of immortality for all come time,

Splendid flashes of ivory surrounded in lips,

Posted worries eradicated, a man in his prime.

 

 

Cold hands encase arms of his first youth,

Two bodies pushed together in quickened force,

Dark circles plunge deep in faces no smiles,

The pounding heart beat is just par for the course.

 

 

Groins stiffen as teeth collapse neck veins,

Tighter holds envelop his weakened soul,

No fight to be made against the strong,

His life draining forth from man to foe.

 

 

Licking fingers clean of sweet pink food,

Dead bodies lay quiet at feet and spire,

Handsome boys never chance against him,

This beautiful and evil pale vampire.

Author's Note

As I always say, be honest and enjoy!

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i admire your honesty and openness to express the sexual aspect of this, as it is scarcely ever examined in the books of lore and especially not in today"s novels . it is merely inferred and largely left out. however, you describe the experience with an obvious relish which makes the write even more delicious to read. the whole vampire thing is an obvious turn on for you, n'est pas? very nicely penned!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I wouls say that it is, I've always had the fantasy of the victim.

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It's good.
To me, there was the sounds of action and suspense up until the line that said "Dead bodies lay quiet at feet and spire" which is followed by a silence.

it did well in providing another accurate portrayal of the whole vampire concept

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[Hayley]

Best line to end it with: "Handsome boys never chance against him,
This beautiful and evil pale vampire."
Well I must say you do a very fine job with whole vampire fantasy. Sometimes it can get corny, but you really put your readers there in the moment.

[Carrollann]

I really like it, I mean it, a lot! You make the sickening images sounds so beautiful and graceful. I have jumped on the vampire craze myself recently, I could never stand Blade, but (I can hear the groans coming) Twilight has pulled me back in. Vampires are just monsters if the story doesn't have romance. And I have never been a big fan of monsters movies. Moreover, you bring romance to the scene with your language. Lovely!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Love vampires myself, but sadly this Twilight generation is killing it for me. But I still enjoy a good vampire story. Nicely portrayed. Great write!

[Muse]

I know I critique heavily about poems and vampires being cliche. But I will admit to thinking they are quite lovely in their mystery. To be of death and beauty..........just like your poems, you can't get much better than that. :)

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

The last lines kill this f*****g love it the vampire hits the mark my friend the dark sense to this reads of true art no bullshit just a straight forward write I have to admit im a fan my friend and with writes like these anyone could see why.
Great work keep posting

[Angel Bluestocking]

i agree with Bed Head. great write, i love it!
cool portrayal of vampires!

[Gitana Deneff]

and for marie. I think the pink blood is because it's smeared on white skin and fingers .

[Gitana Deneff]

I like the "groins stiffen as teeth collapse neck veins". Such a strong poem, as always. Well done.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Excellent piece of work! Love the rhyming.