The Vampire

A subject that is indeed very close to my heart, as a fan of all things Vampire, I like to write on the context of the fantasy.

Those eyes fake lust in prey so hopeless,

A mere glance puts thoughts in his ear,

He yearns for the touch of warm skin,

Blood pulses in vessels so close to fear.

 

 

Less talk summing questions in those fortunate,

The gift of immortality for all come time,

Splendid flashes of ivory surrounded in lips,

Posted worries eradicated, a man in his prime.

 

 

Cold hands encase arms of his first youth,

Two bodies pushed together in quickened force,

Dark circles plunge deep in faces no smiles,

The pounding heart beat is just par for the course.

 

 

Groins stiffen as teeth collapse neck veins,

Tighter holds envelop his weakened soul,

No fight to be made against the strong,

His life draining forth from man to foe.

 

 

Licking fingers clean of sweet pink food,

Dead bodies lay quiet at feet and spire,

Handsome boys never chance against him,

This beautiful and evil pale vampire.

Author's Note

As I always say, be honest and enjoy!

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i admire your honesty and openness to express the sexual aspect of this, as it is scarcely ever examined in the books of lore and especially not in today"s novels . it is merely inferred and largely left out. however, you describe the experience with an obvious relish which makes the write even more delicious to read. the whole vampire thing is an obvious turn on for you, n'est pas? very nicely penned!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I wouls say that it is, I've always had the fantasy of the victim.

[Brandon]

Cold hands encase arms of his first youth,
Two bodies pushed together in quickened force,
Dark circles plunge deep in faces no smiles,
The pounding heart beat is just par for the course

i loved all of that best part of the poem, i know its about vampires but that stanza makes me think of something so much deeper.

[Darksummerswind]

In my opinion this a very dark poem but than again that's what most vampires are portrayed as. Still this is a great poem, good job!

[obvious pseudonym]

i loooove vampires(twilight arnt real vampires) and you portrayed them here at their fullest potential. your words are truly magiacl and make my brain over flow with pictures of imaginatry.

[Imagination-mage]

this is really good, im not really a vampire fan (cause Twilight ruined it for me) but this actually makes you crave more!!!

[Shep]

The line that i like the best is: The gift of immortality for all come time,

Splendid flashes of ivory surrounded in lips,

Posted worries erradicated, a man in his prime.


Because it is true as we all of worries if an eradicated Prime… I also find this poem has just the right liner length. I find if more than 8 inches it becomes distracting.

[NightShade]

Nature's saline solution may trickle from my eyes for sheer joy at your portrayal of psycho-sexual nightmare beings of lore; with a hint of how they walk among us in less sanguinary forms as well. This is the stuff that gets my pulse to quicken in dark delight.

[Audrey Howitt]

Violent and seductive! Great portrait and entertaining write!

[Sheena]

this is beautiful, and i used to be obsessed with vampires, so loved it. read it twice :)

[Marie Harrison]

Vicious and hungry is this vampire
I like the line licking fingers clean of
sweet pink food, because it's a tiny
stream of blood so it could be a hue
of pink. Plus, it made me shiver
picturing it in my mind.
Oh...I like this vampire poem.

[LadyNaida]

It was interesting read. Very intriguing..and not what I expected.