The Vampire

A subject that is indeed very close to my heart, as a fan of all things Vampire, I like to write on the context of the fantasy.

Those eyes fake lust in prey so hopeless,

A mere glance puts thoughts in his ear,

He yearns for the touch of warm skin,

Blood pulses in vessels so close to fear.

 

 

Less talk summing questions in those fortunate,

The gift of immortality for all come time,

Splendid flashes of ivory surrounded in lips,

Posted worries eradicated, a man in his prime.

 

 

Cold hands encase arms of his first youth,

Two bodies pushed together in quickened force,

Dark circles plunge deep in faces no smiles,

The pounding heart beat is just par for the course.

 

 

Groins stiffen as teeth collapse neck veins,

Tighter holds envelop his weakened soul,

No fight to be made against the strong,

His life draining forth from man to foe.

 

 

Licking fingers clean of sweet pink food,

Dead bodies lay quiet at feet and spire,

Handsome boys never chance against him,

This beautiful and evil pale vampire.

Author's Note

As I always say, be honest and enjoy!

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i admire your honesty and openness to express the sexual aspect of this, as it is scarcely ever examined in the books of lore and especially not in today"s novels . it is merely inferred and largely left out. however, you describe the experience with an obvious relish which makes the write even more delicious to read. the whole vampire thing is an obvious turn on for you, n'est pas? very nicely penned!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I wouls say that it is, I've always had the fantasy of the victim.

[Jack...]

Thomas, you have given us a look from the victim's perspective of coming in contact with a vampire. I felt this, I truly felt this, fear combined with excitement was evident. very nicely done my friend.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you x

[Frieda P]

I'm not big on the whole vampire venue, but you had me with this piece, that last verse is a killer, obviously...ha. 'Licking fingers clean of sweet pink food'...I'm so glad I haven't had breakfast my evil friend!!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

lol, thanks hun

[Frieda P]

;-)

[Sami Khalil]

"Groins stiffen as teeth collapse neck veins,
Tighter holds envelop his weakened soul,
No fight to be made against the strong,
His life draining forth from man to foe."
Wow. I felt I was watching a horror movie with some vampire love scenes...WOOOOOO

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[BlueDreams]

Really nice poem :) It was fun to read :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you

[Bats In The Belfry]

Long time Vampire lover here...I enjoyed the picture your words painted of him getting his beastly needs met.

[Buniheart]

I LOVEE the plain chillness your poem feeds on! Your words are so clear and vivid. Its truly truly truly a masterpiece!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Awesome... I love vampires too and really enjoyed the way you put them on paper... getting tired of these sissy vampire movies portraying them as romantic... now this is what it is about.

[Salena Mohammed]

This is a really amazing poem, very descriptive and emotional :)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

I find this line, "A mere glance puts thoughts in his ear", extraordinarily curious. It seems to connect sight to thought to sound; and odd sequence of events. But, I became comfortable with it if I imagined it to be a form of mind thrall that manifested itself as an auditory hallucination.

[khalid]

from the structure to the images through the words picking, it is an amazing poem. very enjoyable to read. thank you